Brief Conceits will be moving off of Blogger onto a WordPress-powered site. The transition will happen later this week. The web address will remain the same, and if you are subscribed to the RSS that should remain the same as well. Thank you!

Saturday, May 17, 2008

Man's Inhumanity

Going for a different tone than in my first two short stories.
~~~

Thunder rolled through the valley as the procession marched toward the clearing. In the lead, a small girl, held high for all to see, crying.

In the midst of the clearing was laid a sacrificial pier, reaching upward to the crackling heavens. A virgin sacrifice must be made, or so was thought. Silently, the mob gathered round. The girl, now struggling but in vain, is tied to the center stake.

A fire lit, burning, blazing. The monstrous deed was done.

Rain begins to pour down from the heavens. The people perceive it as a blessing, when the skies are really weeping.

No comments:

Post a Comment